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Fool

No one ever said life was easy
That's the truest thing I've ever heard
Go ahead and try to appease me
I'll turn you away

Your so tired, shoulders are broken
Just let it all down
(let it all down)
No more holding up your world
It's over

No one ever said it would be easy
Do you think it's different for you?
Testify and tell your secrets
Or let your lies carry you through

Doesn't matter to me
(matter to me)
Cause I know the truth
Your ugly

Go ahead and rest your shoulders
Take off your mask
Remember there's one you can't fool
(me, can't fool me)
You can't fool me

No one ever said life was easy
Truest thing I've ever heard
Not so special now, are you?
Your are the fool
(my fool)

Author notes

I'm having this HUGE writers block so I'm trying to get back in the game with anything I can come up with. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed reading this and PLEASE COMMENT. Your comments are what makes me decide whether or not to keep writing.

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  • Poesing
    August 30, 2008

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    Hey - keep pluggin'! Writers block happens to all of us! When you can't find anything else to write about, write something about the writers block. That even sometimes gets ya goin' again. Take care.


  • Emile
    June 27, 2008

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    Good

    You have a good sense of rhyme and rhythm and can put feelings into your word choices. You are a diamond in the rough and some of your work needs polishing..but the talent shines through. Take time to review your own work and be hard on yourself or you will never know just how good you can be. Your simplest words can carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them and not hear them.