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As Dew from Lily Pearls

As dew from lily pea[r]ls away
Stretched time can’t rhyme eternity.
Desire whose fire may warm today
Ephemeris is seen to be.
We pass, time due, climb through life’s play,
Fall, fate forgotten, from life’s tree,
Remembered in leafed album stray,
Or – for a spell – where family
Must thrust dust, trust our writings may
Lift spirits from banality.
If ALL is in, through, ALL our stay
Lingers in some way to key
Youth, age, together, thus may mock despair,
PEARL Seed be[a]d-feed leads to new life, joy rare...

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  • jaded teardrop

    amazing!!! I loved how you put the rhyme scheme in to this poem to. it is really well done. it was a really good read, not just another poem. Thank you for this wonderful read!!

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  • Wonderful!

    As Always!

  • Nice

    a tricky write indeed and you pulled it off very well. All the best in the contest.