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Petals

Pink, soft, and gentle,
flitting in the zephyr,
Sakura blossoms.
Pretty pink petals fly high
past your beautiful figure.

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  • HeirOfEnoch
    March 25, 2008

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    One of my very first poems was on cherry blossoms, and it brings back good memories, thanks for writing this