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Sky

Clear and high
Dotted with white
Blue, cerulean blue
Puffy with cotton balls
Sad and grey
Throwing liquid bullets
Windy and biting
Scolding with intensive heat
Full of nothing yet so full
Where birds fly and humans dream to (fly)

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  • TheInnocent
    March 26, 2008

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    Nice

    short simple and sweet, i like it.
    you might try hurling instead of throwing? it's up to u
    great voice
    nice contradiction, full of nothing yet so full, my paradime is spinning
    nice job