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Just Me


The person I’m suppose to be
How do I achieve what they want to see
My individuality lost in her touch
Mom the one who loves me so much
She teaches me the best she knows how
Doesn’t she realize it’s time for her bow
No more pats on the shoulder to remind me
End this and let me be
Simply........ just me



*Rdrl*

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  • elemental angel
    March 27, 2008
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    A wonderful take on the prompt
    Bravo