What can I write to rhyme today?
With what small words can I slyly play?
Past noon and still no words come to me
My thoughts in happy torrents, free
Sing a song, or hum a tune
waiting for the words warm boon,
What can I write to rhyme today?
what sentences can I bend my way?
But in the end, I think its worth it
A story to read as I sit,
Waiting for more words to be,
Penned by myself, for all to see
Author notes
Contest entry, i like it, im not sure if this is the kind of writing the contest host was looking for, but.. i think its fine
A contest entry
- Just Rhyme Well by piccola.
1200 points, ended March 27, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Whatever Your Heart Desires by xxhoopstar21xx.
300 points, ended June 8, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow!!
wow that is great!! i like it! i especially like the ending! very good. i know I feel like this sometimes when I write! thanks for writing this cuz i always wanted to find the rite words for sumething like this but you my dear have already done that.
thank you!
SilverWolf
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We've all been there...waiting for the words to come. I like the line "what sentences can I bend my way". Ryhme suits me, and I see it suits you too.
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I am not able to write poetry that rhymes. This is great!
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Aww no trophy? But its SO good! Basic, true, but well rhymed ^.^ and clearly very well-thought. Great fight against writer's block! Heh
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Good write
As we sit patient waiting for the muse
we often look beyond we ourselves do look back my man and you will see an abundance of stories to tell indeed.
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You would say that storiesuntold... heh...
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This is a cute poem that I am sure all of us can relate to. It can get frusterating some times when you want to write a poem and nothing seems to come to you. Best of luck in your contest. Thanks for commenting on mine as well.
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I feel like this sometimes
This is great ryhme and you did a great job. I believe most of us rhyming poets or expecially I know for me, do feel this way many of times.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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I do like it I've felt this way many a time, and the title was great!
all the best
~aj~
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I enjoyed your idea of playing with words, and that if words don't come, to ingest the words of a book. Maybe they will form connections to other words and get things moving?
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I like this
It's Very catchy...sweet and simple...if the contest host doesn't like it's okay..i think it's very good!!
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Believe me ...
this is a song of contentedness -- so sing, Poet, sing!
Blessed be,
Myra
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who cares if the contest host likes it? If you're happy it must be good.
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