The geese fly
happy to see them back
they're in V formation, in the sky
warmth, lacked
it's still cold outside
they always know when to come home
guide
the warm winds roam
bring them back, time's on their side.
Bring them back, time's on their side
the warm winds roam
guide
they always know when to come home
it's still cold outside
warmth, lacked
they're in V formation, in the sky
happy to see them back
the geese fly.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.25/2008
Author notes
A form created by: David R. Hall aka Poetic-Theorem
But, the mirrored part of it, is my style.
I've never penned one of these before, so please be kind.
Please tell me what you think
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I've seen this form before from Poetic-Theorem. I like the basic flow to the modulus 3 and the mirrored part works too in reflection. Good write Cynthia, thanks for sharing it and keep writing.
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Great Work
Wow!! what a mathematical form you've used here.. wonderful piece of poetry.. loved reading it.. thanx for sharing..
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Yeah all the birds are coming back here. The vultures arrived in Hinckley Ohio around the 17th the robins have arrived out of the woods. hehe Great write Dear
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I don't know what a Modulus is!...lol....so this looks fine to me! I like the images in this. I wish I could start seeing the geese coming back! Have seen some robins, so....maybe soon??!!
I love your wording. This had a nice soft feel to it.
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No idea what a Modulus 3 is but I like the topic. Reminds me of the swallows that return here every late Spring.
I like seeing birds in flight, the formations, etc, it really makes me appreicate just how diverse nature is.
Ah I see a 3,6,8,2,5,8,1,4,7 scheme, nope that doesn't follow for me. I'd have assumed, 3,6,8,2,5,7,1,4,6...so I guess it's not a logical pattern. Ah well, so I have no idea what the Modulus 3 is.
Ignore me.
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