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Perfume Scented Breeze (Senryu)



perfume scented breeze
wakes slumbering memories~
flower garden stroll



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Traditional Senryu, 5-7-5

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  • MorningDew
    March 28, 2008

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    Congratulations on your gold trophy for this senryu. I really liked the imagery you have displayed here.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Lovely write, gold winner too. So many images, scents awakened from these few lines. Congratulations on taking top spot in this contest.


  • azure85 gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Very nice senryu, with the scent of memories mingled with the perfume of the flowers. I am wishing you luck in the contest, this is a gem!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 25, 2008

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    I really like this. A nice spring stroll, smelling the flowers in the nights breeze. Very nice. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli

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