Miley is my sister, Ray my brother true,
I have the honor of watching over both of you
Let me start by saying, I love you both as one
Emily as a daughter, Raymond as a son
Your life together at last has now begun
America so far away and foreign to my eyes
Never seemed so close to me, imagine my surprise
Dreams of weddings bells and of mothers cries
Ray proposed to Miley, and Miley answered yes
Another day in paradise, another love to bless
Years of love I hope for you, nothing more, nothing less.
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oh my god! Simon! *tear* you could not be any more perfect! Thank you for such a beautiful poem! Ray printed it off and one copy is above my bed and the other on the door of my hospital room.we both are so very blessed to have you in our lives! Your beats per line match for once!!! Again, thank you so very much!
Always your angel,
Miley -
This is fantastic!! What a great read, and even though I do not know of whom you speak, I wish them many years of happiness as well.
You did a great job on this one!! I love reads like this one and this is extra special, because of the content in it!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love my brother
Nevermore~
Me
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