Natures beauty
bathed eloquently
while blossoms ran
Author notes
summer haiku
A contest entry
- Summer Haiku by sheltered.
600 points, ended March 26, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Infinituple Haiku by Pollycheck.
600 points, ended April 10, 2008, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
Love this sis
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
I love the rose border
I have up 2 new ones well one is not a poem
Hope you come on over
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~~
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I love this. This is very very beautiful. Short, but says so much. Well done on a fantastic piece of imagery poetry.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Congratulations on the Emerald Cups!!
Just awesome!! I love haiku, and this one is simply gorgeous!! Thank you for sharing!! 
xx Cyn xx
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Beautiful hun.Truly amazing job here! welldone xx
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excellent
This is beautiful
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you for entering my haiku contest.
Natures beauty
bathed eloquently
while blossoms ran
This is very well written haiku, but I must ask the question, is this actually a personification? Personification is frowned on in the writing of haiku. -
Very nice :)
Taking your thoughts one step further is a way to draw this Bear into your write....
....the best part is the action I found in your words....lots of imagery moving around...
..loved it!
Good luck,
Bear ~
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Scaredy blossoms! Nice. Love the word eloquent and how you used it here.
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Wonderful
I actually like it. Reminds me more of spring, but its about nature and blossoms. So I like it anyways.
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