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~* French Kissed on Fallen Stars ~*

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The flurry of flavorful intentions
             disrobed passion

                 
beyond a seven letter word written on flesh
                      
of Souls bent on satisfaction,
                                   aurae stimulation 
                              
through a single touch.

They threaded with fingers and sewed skin
     
pressed atop Nirvana's blanket.

Coiled their conversations with tongue~~
    
and tempted Spirit to take another glance
         
at what rest before the altar of anonymity.

Fruits experienced, a delight beyond Dreams.
    
Legs spread an array of bounty, plentiful
         
for pleasure to be reached, inches away.

Stimulation stretched into hours, forgotten
    
as days slept with night,
          copulated in nakedness
              
under French kiss of fallen stars.

Music made when bodies strummed~
    
both mouths hummed in synchronicity
         
after quake answered
              
any possible doubts questioned.




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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    How awesomely beautiful this is, sweetie!
    Sigh.....
    Makes me think beautiful thoughts of the one I love
    All the best to you in this contest! Love you!


  • Brimstone
    March 26, 2008
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    Erotic and classy as always. It's nice to read you again.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    Very few can write erotica as you do, I know I've tried and failed miserably lol
    Your poem is so rich in imageries - and what imageries!!!
    and also holds lots of passionate feelings.
    Always a wonderful and hot read

    Big kisses and love
    Mari


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Erotic but with elegant taste. Awesome background too
    Good luck with this I like it alot.


  • Beret55 silver member
    March 25, 2008
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    As usual, another masterpiece. Your flow of words just blend together and sing.


  • HaleyMary
    March 25, 2008
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    Beautiful write, Sis. Lots of passion expressed in this piece. I liked the ending the best. It makes me think of how even when we have our doubts in life, something can always happen or come along that can help us change our minds. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.


  • thepoetssoul
    March 25, 2008

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    Steamy...
    What a beautiful piece of poetry here.I love the imagery and sensual lyrics.Your words were weaved wonderfully throughout this poemA most stunning and powerful penning.Thanks for sharing and best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • delightfulmess silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    oooooh lala.... Nothing like questions being answered on a quake.
    What a sensual delight this is.


    "both mouths hummed in synchronicity
    after quake answered
    any possible doubts questioned."....

    The butterfly population has landed.

    Great job
    Love this one Hot Mamma.


    Delila




  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Although as soon as I read this I knew who it was I need you to please place your name in author notes your option was quite obvious. Thanks so much for entering such a lovely and hot....make that HOT piece.

    Good luck hon
    Passions


    • Desire gold member
      March 25, 2008
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      Me slaps self on the forehead..
      Oy~ I forgot my own name

      Will do Beautiful and done
      Woooooooo Hoooooooooooo


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Whew!

    A Romantic Masterpiece.
    WOW!!!!!
    Loving passions oozes from the pages.
    Tastefully sensual and erotic (pun intended)
    This is amazing
    One of your very best erotic writes
    Your words made me drift into dreams like a romantic novel...

    "They threaded with fingers and sewed skin
    pressed atop Nirvana's blanket...

    Fruits experienced, a delight beyond Dreams.
    Legs spread an array of bounty, plentiful
    for pleasure to be reached, inches away."

    Ooooohhhhh
    Aye, sensually HOT!

    You dont need this; however,
    I wish you the best in the contest!

    Much love,
    Many blessings

    David



  • penman gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Excellent

    Oh my precious this was so sensuous and well done. The images powerful and enticing. Best of luck in the contest.


  • StarEyes
    March 25, 2008

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    WOW!!! Girl, what a read this one is! Holy Hot Stuff!! This is beyond words!! I love the images in this one, and with that, I think I had better find something else to occupy my time, or it will be some walls for you

    Best of luck in this contest!!


    s and lots of love

    Nettie

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