the reflecting light of an rainbow prism
bounces off their skin
like the beginnings of an old black and white movie
a still life caught in Kodak moments
in silent strokes of the imagination
a dream of blacken coffee colored distance things
and of paintings full of abstract water color schemes
the sight of milky white felt lily pads
and the mesh of human skin tones
makes the colors of their insides out
full of crystal clear cut images
of obliviously colorblinded love
A contest entry
- project poetry season one [prewrite & fresh auditions] by blackday.
600 points, ended March 27, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice would be lovely?
Comments
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wow. this was amazing. good images. i liked it.
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This was good, sister.
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I liked a few of these lines, but it got to be too much. The poem kind of just, stalled. I do love this concept though. It was a great image, like each memory is a color & then tied up nicely at the end with it bouncing back again into the "white light."
You can enter again or edit if you wish to do so. This one is close to being great. :]
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thank you for your feedback =]
I will edit this and I will let you know when it's all "cleaned" up
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