I
Needed fallen when I first saw
Endless heartache for one and all
Everywhere poets fall
Down the mountain one and all
Another name I see now
Never quickly always slow
Every single day I show
Why this persona must just go
Now I ask you, look in my eyes
All this madness I despise
Magic away all the lies
Elevate fallen to the skies
Author notes
any ideas....
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatever you like...
Comments
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Good use of the Acrostic form. It really tells a story, leading you through the poem easily. Good luck in this contest.
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Nice
Well done and very rhythmic, best of luck to you in the contest.
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Wow cool poem!! Tells a journey....
Hmmmm... I shall have to think on a name
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