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Oriental Notes

Soothing music soul
reverberating nicely
within china's heart

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5-7-5 ony!

A contest entry

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Aww, this was really beautiful and a nice read..you've done outstanding here and I wish you the best of luck


  • Kelli Marie
    March 25, 2008

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    Very nicely done. I also enjoyed the read. You did great. Thank you for sharing this in my contest.
    Kelli