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Haiku [Silver treads]

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whispers weave silver
through silent moments of thought
where timelessness reigns


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  • myrataal silver member
    March 26, 2008

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    I loved ...

    the entrance line -- so very poetic! -- but I also loved the tautology in the phrase silent moments of thought ... and I am not at all amazed to find in the exit line the timelessness, which embraces the whole of creation.

    You do love nature! And the ocean ... I think you have enough oceanic poems to fill another book!



    Congratulations on your trophy.
    Love
    Myra


  • Kelli Marie
    March 25, 2008

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    Very poetic. I think you did very nice with writing this haiku. Thank you for sharing it in my contest.
    Kelli