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Purpose

Gazing into the perpetual night sky
where stars illuminate the darkness
the sky, a deep shade of blue and almost black
gazes right back at me, as if questioning me.

But a mere speck in the universe under the sky
the feeling of insignificance appears
questioning my own existence,
wondering what purpose I serve in this life.

So how was my first poem on here? xD Common, Unusual, Good, Bad etc?

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  • Nakatrea
    March 30, 2008

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    well well well. an awesome poem has appeared in front of my nose! I often think about just how small we are and why we even bother trying to think about being so insignificant. but then again if everyone id doomed to die and we are all equal on this planet why not grow up change the world and die knowing you did something good?

    good job R.

    Kat


  • shopaholica
    March 26, 2008
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    Thanks!
    I appreciate all of your feedbacks


  • ixtli
    March 25, 2008

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    This is really great. I have often comtemplated the same things while looking up at the night sky. I am a bit of an insomniac at times, so sometimes I spend a lot of time looking at the sky at night. This is beautiful. Great job!


  • Himura Kenshin
    March 25, 2008

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    WOW!

    This is fantastic!! I oft think the same think about the universe and existence myself. As your first poem on the site, it is great I hope to see more of your works in the future. Thakx for the write.

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