the sun of spring shines
tulips and daffodils bloom
their colors explode
A contest entry
- Traditional Haiku by Kelli Marie.
600 points, ended March 25, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful little ditty.
I have said it before and I will say it again, you truly know how to take the haiku and make it a gem. In this case a flower of inspiration for us all. And that graphic is also precious.
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Gorgeous Adorable..its cute when you can express just in short..Nice haiku
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i love tulips and daffodils! we have both on our kitchen table right now!
none outside yet, though.
colors exploding... i liked tha ending, it made me think of the flowers popping open all of a sudden!
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Brilliant
The colors explode and the beauty of your words are wondrous
*Go with God* my sweet sister,
rose* Valerie "f
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Beautiful tulips and daffodils, I love the picture. Might steal it..lol A great haiku as well. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli
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