Her hand was soft
And it wore two rings
That clinked against my own
And I was hers from that moment
She leant against me
And I breathed on her neck
Hot. On purpose
Because I was hers
And she told me of the man
That left her bags on the porch
And I held her closely
Her pain was mine
She smiled when we danced
And I cursed her heterosexuality
And we danced some more
And I danced closely
A man wouldn't leave her
My lips rescued
And she laughed
And I ached to continue
I laid beside her
Naked and longing
The alcohol kept her warm
It set her inhibitions free
And she kissed me
And she held me
And she loved me
And she whispered promises
For four hours
Then she retracted
And my heart fractured
And she loved me no more
And I love her more than ever.
Please tell me what you think
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Ouch! The ways that alcohol can bring out those feelings, only to sober up the next day and have them get locked away on us, is really rather painful for someone who has always longed to hear those things and feel those things from the other person. I know. I've been there. I think this poem really captures some of the trials of not just a homosexual relationship, but all relationships in general. The heart plays tricks on us, making us think that some people mean what they say when it's just a fling. It's upsetting, but it's real life. And you're right, long after they retract, we still love them more than ever. It's not fair. But at least it leads to great poems like this one
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i love this piece. sorry it all happened.
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this is a very intersting piece of work. i liked the story. only a few moments together with a very special someone and now you are trapped forever in love. great great poem. i must ask, is this a true poem, or based on a similar experience?
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Been There
Nicely done
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realistic
wow i really liked this. many girls can't handle the idea that they could be with a woman and so they reject it even if they want it. it has happened to me as well and it left me shattered, and yet i still loved the girl, even more so for the experience!
ah, women....
anyways, i'm just trying to say that i can relate and also that this was really well written.
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Wow
If only things like that never happend but sadly they do. I'm hoping for your sake that this is just mere words and aren't connected to reality. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it <3 -
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Thanks, sadly it is real. It happened on Saturday. Glad you liked it though, at least something good came of a bad situation eh? xx
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