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Favorite Beat

Here I lay on his bare sweaty chest.
The music is loud, TV on
But all that I hear
as I lay here
Curled up next to your soft warm body.

Ba bumb, ba bumb

The heart I know has been broken
So many times before.
In hopes of being that girl,
The one who picks it up off the floor.
In hopes of being that girl, the one who lasts forever.

Ba bumb, ba bumb

I lay here dreaming of you and me,
Three kids, two cars, one house,
One big happy family.
In hopes of being that girl,
The one to hold your last name.
Lets put this picture in a frame
so precious and true.

Ba bumb, ba bumb

I love it when you hold me tight
Even when we fight.
When I’m right here by your side
My feelings I just cannot hide.
But wait my mind is starting to wander.
I look up and notice your stare.

Ba bumb, ba bumb

You say to me softly
“I want our children to have your eyes!”
My smile grows from ear to ear,
I believe I may have even shed a tear.
But its ok don’t worry
Cause baby when I’m with you I have no fear! 

Ba Bumb, Ba bumb

I could lay here for hours
Just listening to your personal love song play
It’s the most beautiful thing to me
Your hearts seems to sing to me
I will listen to this beat forever
As long as you will let me

Ba bumb, ba bumb

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 27, 2008

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    Beautiful work. such great emotion and a great take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing. I loved this part:

    I could lay here for hours
    Just listening to your personal love song play
    It’s the most beautiful thing to me
    Your hearts seems to sing to me


  • TabbyCat
    March 27, 2008

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    LOVE it...so sweet and I can feel the moment when he makes you smile..that uncontrollable, awesome moment that cements all that you feel.