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He’s the one I miss
He’s the one I reminisce
Time and time again

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I love him

In a list

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    Nice Haiku. Flows well. Love is such a powerful feeling and you have expressed it so very well. Superb poem


  • LanguishedLad
    March 26, 2008

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    Short and sweet, I am becoming more a lover of short poems, well penned and keep up the great writing


  • Topaze gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    nice

    Well done and very meaningful, a very nice piece all the best to you.


  • Kelli Marie
    March 25, 2008

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    Liking the way this is written. Count is good, and form is correct. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli