love for friends abounds
a gentle heart stirs faintly
you inspire me
Author notes
Dedicated to my Axel and Larxene because they're just such great friends. You guys are friggin' awesome. Don't forget that. And I love you very much. You're a wonderful inspiration and so much more.
A contest entry
- Traditional Haiku by Kelli Marie.
600 points, ended March 25, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice
A nice and touching haiku, very well done all the best to you.
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Thank you very much ^^
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Forgot to tell you about the capitalization...all lower or all upper.
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oop.. well that's an easy fix
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A heart warming senyru. The syllable count is right on. You did a good job. Thank you for sharing in my contest.
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Thank you for putting it up! Haiku is one of my favorite forms of poetic expression. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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