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[ i gave you my heart and soul ]

i gave you my heart and soul
but you ripped it apart, unwhole
you left me in this padded room
and left me to my internal doom

sleepless nights hoping for a call
restless nights for nothing at all
fighting back tears through the day
slowly pushing everyone else away

all i wanted was you, your love
but you'd push and shove
breaking my heart
our forever couldn't start




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  • KillerXxXCupcake
    April 11, 2008
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    This is great. I can Totally connect to it. I love the last line