As we say goodnight
Sweet dreams are said
before we leave
to slumber in bed
and with the promise
fresh in the mind
our dreams or taken
to see what they find
To dream of love
and people dear
keeps each one safe
from other fear.
To dream of smiles
and happy grins
wipe away all of
the workday sins
When you wake
happy in the thought
that you dreamt and
found what you sought
a long lost Friend
a golden sprite
a magical unicorn
a bright blue kite
Have Sweet dreams
my dear friend
A wish from the heart
to you I send
Sleep well dear heart
may the Angels play
within your dreams
on this happy day
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
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gentle
nice work--very calming. soothing. bit like a lullabye. "our dreams or taken" is that correct? i am glad that you rhymed. good stuff
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You make it hard to write a good poem. well written.
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Wow!!
Tight rhyme my Friend and Love the weaving of words to bring the reader where he or she needs to be
Magnificent piece penned!!
To dream of love
and people dear
keeps each one safe
from other fear.
To dream of smiles
and happy grins
wipe away all of
the workday sins
Loved this!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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What a great job on this one my dear brother!! Reminds me of something I would say to my grandbabies
I love this... And if you promise not to tell, I will share a secret with you...
My dreams are sooooo often filled with the sweetest thoughts and wonderful times.... ummmm, yeah, better stop there!
Best of luck in this contest!!
Nevermore~
Me
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very pretty. It flows slightly rough but I liked it. It's sweet and beautiful. Great write and thanks for the entry.
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