Loving Whispers
Caressing Thoughts and Hearts
Husky Breath
Tickling My Ear
Lyrics Ringing
a Song Turned Alive
Notes Dancing Across Airwaves
"Dream of Us?"
Your Voice, Soft, Sweet,
"Of Course"
My Resigned Voice
Tears Cracking the Sudden Silence
"Don't Cry"
"Love, I Must"
and Though We Be Apart
I Lie in Your Arms Tonight
Author notes
This is for my Scott. I followed his way of writing, capitalizing the important words, and letting the articles and unimportant words fall down. I think that is how he does it,
I want him to know that even though I am four hours and 124 days away, I lie in his arms every night.
A contest entry
- ~Sweet Dreams~ by Maybe Anastasia.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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nice but--
--not sure if I really like the caps.
i think it's a bit over done. if you want to use the caps... use them sparingly..? particularly in these extremely short lines.
i wonder what it would look like if you didnt use caps at all, but in the dialogue. i think the gentleness of the poem would come out a lot better that way.
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Aww
How sweet is this poem?I really loved the emotions in it, thats a big thing for me. It is also very romantic, and descriptive. It's just a beautiful poem all around. -
This is beautiful. It was sweet and descriptive. A little hard to follow but you did a wonderful job. Thanks so much for the entry.
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