Good morning, Beautiful.
How are you today?
I watched you while you slept.
And I kept the monsters away.
Good morning, darlin'.
How your eyes sure do glitter.
When the sun rays hit the pupils,
And the walls refelect your titter.
Good morning, honey bee.
I love the smell of your hair.
And the feel of your skin,
Underneath the blankets that we share.
Good morning, sunshine.
I thank God for every day.
Thanks for the simple things.
Like holding hands, and the things that you say.
Good night, Beautiful.
Let me take off that shoe.
I promise to keep you warm throughout the night.
Cause baby, I love you.
Author notes
I wonder if a girl knows what a girl wants more than a guy..
p.s. I'm not lesbian.. I just wanted to see if a girl could do this better than a guy.
A contest entry
- Knights in Shining Armour by EeyoreUK.
300 points, ended April 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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interesting....hmmmm..it is good.good thoughts.good way to rythm things.i like the first stanza.keeping the monsters away.
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omg my ashley is a lesbian!!! i always knew it!! i mean. i always thought you had a crush on me but now i know for sure. i want to be with you ashley! please let me touch your boobies!!!!!
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This is so sweet, thanks for entering my contest
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very sweet, i would say a girl knows better then a guy and a guy knows more what a guy wants than a girl. Good luck in your contest.
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Thanks. lol I was kinda rushed, sorry that it wasn't better. lol
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