That Thing We Had Felt So Good.
I mean, What was better than what we shared?
We Hugged and Kissed - and nothing was wrong
But then you just walked away and left me to drown
The sorrow shown in my tears- did you care?
Why could you leave me when everything was great
What could have happened to make you change
I look around, and who can I trust
A friend who does not speak and a friend who just leaks
This information i have, but where do I go
Welcome to the broken heart - a tour bus often packed
Where? Why? And How? - often the questions
Help Me fix it - please, but will that work
One person I know, someone who can fix it
But will they return...ever?
That moment shall stay fixed forever
The time you stabbed me with your words
Left me without loooking me in the eyes
What had I done to deserve this treating
Well - I had no idea
That Night my eyes filled with tears
I wanted a proper goodbye
Why couldn't you give me that
I lost you but loved you
And Now I Search forevermore in the Lost and Found
Author notes
- My first go at a Free verse - hope its ok
A contest entry
- One Word Prompt by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 28, 2008, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain In Poetry by Jadis Blade.
450 points, ended April 11, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such sadness, its overwhelming in a good way. great work, especially for a first free verse. Loved this part:
That moment shall stay fixed forever
The time you stabbed me with your words
Left me without loooking me in the eyes
What had I done to deserve this treating
Well - I had no idea
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geez is this real darling ?
it was sad n heartbroken
n i dont want you to feel like that!
anyways good luck darling
i love you brother
n if this isnt real
your amzeing -
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Nah not real - just from my imagination for the contest
Thanks =]
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Wow, this is amazingly good...damn you good poet XD lucky lol
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