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The Drugs Are Gone

The drugs are gone
That's just fine
She will sit here and drink that wine

Alcohol will suffice
She doesn't want to roll the dice....
Anymore..

She watches Comedy Central
And ignores the withdrawal
Mind over matter
That is all

Time will go by
When she won't cry
And she will try

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  • Pandorea
    June 3, 2008

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    i like the observation in this. it's different that you aren't trying to be 'her'. you are just saying how thinga are. a refreshing difference, i asssure you.

    thanks for entering.


  • nikkia
    May 18, 2008

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    i love that this is written without judgement just observation and an attempt to understand. it was a great read thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest


  • Sandygram
    April 5, 2008

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    You have penned a very heartfelt poem. Your words are full of emotion. Thsnk you for sharing. Great write!!!

    Take care,
    Sandy