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Trapped in Chains

Trapped in chains
And you walk by
With a wink in your eye
And inquire if help is needed

Feel my pain
And you turn ‘round
Without a sound
And make pretense at empathy

What’s to gain?
By stooping down
Your tears abound
And I am awash with your “help”

Please move on
Take your clutter
Leave me in the gutter
And know that I am better off without you

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  • malmadre gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    The dejected people on the street have their reasons for being there, often not wanting our sympathy nor help. They want to work it out by themselves to have a sense of ownership in their lives and that is why most people try not to see them..I always see them..and know that there's not much that I can do to help except offer help.
    thoughtful response to the prompt...