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Pumping for Love

Girl my heart is pumping for love.

Longing to find my desire within you.

I'm down on my knees girl, only you,

Inhaling the scent that binds us two.

 

Girl my heart is pumping for love.

You leave me hanging each time you walk away.

Build my hunger, angel, I yearn for the day,

you take my hand for your pleasure to play.

 

Girl my heart is pumping for love. 

My princess, setting my senses aflame.

Constant pressure, the urges to keep tame.

No not till you say, its driving me insane.

 

Girl my heart is pumping for love.

I await the day you set my love free.

Sate my desire, I am begging thee.

Tease me angel, don't torment me. 

 

 

 

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Like no prizes for the lady this is for. I love you, ju

 

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Photography by Jem 

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  • Master Ktulu silver member
    March 27, 2008

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    Very passionate and truly a one of a kind piece you have here..excellent write.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Semper-Fi Juggalette
    March 25, 2008
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    wow i can feel the passion
    and picture the movements
    nice


    • Corvus Corone
      March 25, 2008
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      So can I in my mind and the reality is fast approaching, my ju will be with me soon.


  • Galaxy2
    March 25, 2008

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    'Girl, my heart is pumping for love'...so is mine honey!
    'Longinging to find my desire in you'...our desires are mutual, baby!
    'I'm down on my knees girl, only you'...your posture turns me on, my love!
    'Inhaling the scent that binds us two'...yes, and the fragrance coming out of our hot bodies makes us wilder.
    'You leave me hanging each time you walk away'...I leave only to come back, hottie!
    'Build my hunger'...I'll do my best.
    'You take my hand for pleasure to play'...you're all pleasures, my sweet sexy doll!
    'My Princess, setting my senses aflame'...I love to generate heat while playing with you
    'its driving me insane'...you drive me insane too, my dear!
    'Tease me angel'...I'll go on teasing whether or not you ask me so....

    What an erotic piece! Erotic kisses for you, my love!

    Galaxy2


    • Corvus Corone
      March 25, 2008
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      Thank you Galaxy, and love your response, sassy and sexy.

      Sensual kisses lady

      xxxx


  • The Poetic Angel
    March 25, 2008

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    wow

    fanx You Jems m'Lady

    i love it

    smiles its not long now

    xxx Your angel xxx


  • Blueskywonder
    March 25, 2008

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    A very tantalizing piece of erotica full of the torments of sexual longing. Great write with good flow and hot erotic content.


    • Corvus Corone
      March 25, 2008
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      Didn't intend it to be erotic but well umm ya know she does things to me and it happens -blush-


  • tanzanite
    March 25, 2008

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    Oh my goodness! This was wonderful. From the photo and then the perfect flow and rhyme. I loved this piece. I loved the repetition and the great way you ended it as well. This is a beautiful poem of love. Well done.


    • Corvus Corone
      March 25, 2008
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      Thanks Tanz, definitely been worth waiting for my muse to come back

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