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Spring-Time

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Spring

Bright and fresh

Waking to the birds sing

Listen, as together they mesh

Purple crocuses, Golden daffodils

Beautiful, as they grow all over the hills

Now as we have waved goodbye to the snow

Look up into the skies, see a colourful rainbow

Trees rustling with the breeze gently swaying

New born lambs are running around playing

As Bees buzz around the pollen, humming

Spring is in the air, I smelt it coming

Roofs glisten from April showers

Scents drift from flowers

The season of new life

Spring-time

 

 

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Writing prompt - springtime

Springtime is here, duly welcomed by Ostara and Easter. A common feature of both is the giving of eggs, so your task write me a poem about spring in the shape of an egg.

opps me egg looks kinda squashed and round

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  • Candy6
    July 3, 2008
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    Great write


  • ea silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    I would use smelled, not smelt, as that is a type of fish. But otherwise, I thank you for a happy poem for April.


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    A gorgeous description of Spring, and a great shape to this poem, you've really caught the essence of Springtime with some beautiful imagery and a lovely complimentary background...the gentle rhyme gives a good flow to your lines...A most delightful read

    Love and smiles ~Lilac


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Oh sis I am so proud of you! This is so beautiful and the presentation is awesome. Very well done, and you can't help that the Easter bunny sat on your egg!!


    • The Poetic Angel
      March 25, 2008
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      fanx you sis so thats why me egg is squashed it was the Easter Bunny...just him wait till next year lol

      xxx cheeky xxx


  • Corvus Corone
    March 25, 2008

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    Wink my clever lil girl still got it I see. xxx Thank you ju. I hope the tasks are fun for you. Wonder what will be in the box tomorrow or rather my prompt gen.

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