So what the hell? I'm going in
I'm in your hands now ketamine
An endless quest for the perfect goal
To have no body, to be all soul
Work your magic in my head
Take me somewhere beyond dead
I feel your light touch, then you bite
No use putting up a...
...what?
Lost the words. Can't...
...words...
Author notes
It's vague and reliant on cliches. But so are the effects of ket, so that seems fair enough to me...
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This is a very interesting piece, I really like it, the flow was really good, and I really like the end. Very well written, I love it!
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I'm not sure how to take this piece. In a way it almost seems like a satire, which I like.
I never thought to use the word vague to describe a K-hole, but next to 'paralized' and 'complete thought delay' it describes it nicely.
I'm glad I stumbled across this poem. It got me to thinking about that good snortable friend of mine.
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Hmm well i am very far from almost all drugs, the worst thing i am addicted to is wine.. so i wouldnt know, but the poem sounds pretty clear, and even though its a very basic description , it sounds like a good one. -eleno
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