Trapped in the chains
My heart throws around me
I can only follow
Where she decides to lead
Trapped in the chains
My heart throws around me
I can't hold her back
When she decides to lead
I can only do
What my heart asks of me
Because I have no chains around her
She has the chains around me
Author notes
Is fininshed now.
A contest entry
- Trapped in the Chains by myaddiction19.
500 points, ended May 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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Trapped in chains, literally and metaphorically is a lonely place to be. I think you did a good job with the emotions of this write. Good luck.
Kelli -
very well written piece of poetry.. unique take on the prompt me could have only thought of blood-cutting-poems.. loved reading it.. this was really good.. thanx for sharing..
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