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I can fly

I hear your voice,
as I sleep
I feel your touch
as you dream.
When you kiss me…
I can fly...

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A response to

'I didn't see you,
Felt your arms
You pressed against my back
Unhurriedly I turned
I heard
A sigh...'

by Jeff


http://allpoetry.com/poem/4056289

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  • Tattboyspet
    April 2, 2008

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    call it what you will, but that wonderful feeling of being appreciated and loved for what you are is truly unique and amazing!
    flight seems so easily attainable when one believes
    beautiful Jem (as always!)


    • Corvus Corone
      April 2, 2008

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      Between you and me would love to do a collab with the inspiration writer, might not be printable though. Thank you Chantell


  • quantumsurveyor
    March 27, 2008

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    A wonderfully subjective touch on the mystery of love and life. So short and so real - the skill in expressing self in so few words is awesome. Thank you for sharing.

    • Corvus Corone
      March 27, 2008
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      Thank you, though I feel some credit for inspiration goes to Jeff as the response was instinctive, something I am learning to do as a writer.