Sodden desperation,
within cardinal chains.
Renovating anguish into valor.
Eradicating all agony,
during last breaths.
Author notes
15 words
Prompt:
"The strength of submission
is dominant within its rush" - me
A contest entry
- A Quickie :) 10-15-15 by Cerulean Sunrise.
500 points, ended March 25, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - laura's 50th-gold-trophy celebration by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended July 4, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving
Comments
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Congratulations on winning the Bronze. You said a lot with just a few words.
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This is so beautiful... Your wording is exquisite, and it's no wonder Mark gave this the gold shiny. I am absolutely speechless. Well done, and thanks for entering!
Laura x
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Congratulations on the Gold Award Winning poem. A perfect take on the given prompt my Evil and Crazy sister whom I call friend. Peace in light and love.
Noah
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Congratulations on your GOLD!
I'm glad I missed this one
You Nailed it!!
Breath Taking, my Friend.
~ Nicky♥
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very intense write! Well done on the prompt and great job on your entry, dear poet!
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hrmmm
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Nice take on the prompt Good luck with this in the contest
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