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The Damned

Trapped in chains
tears running down my face
immortality faces me
as hunger burns through my body
blood that sweet blood
now its gone
i am trapped
such a stupid mistake
hunting the hunter
letting myself be caught
that man wasnt worth it
i thought he loved me
i though we could be together
hunters in the night
the two of us
forever
he lied to be
he trapped me
he chained me
now he plans my death
death that was to never come
ah here he is now
those blue eyes
once so warm now so cold
i wonder how many of us he has taken
how many ashes i stand on now
how sweet he has a stake
he was sweet
but it was just part of his
predatory charm
his lips were so soft to mine
now they form a hardening sneer
i suppose i had this comming
i suppose i deserve to die
but the hunger its rising
the hunger it always rises
....i cant control it...
...need blood...
.....now!...


...Trapped in chains...
...blood drips down my arm...
...i should have known...
...i let her get to hungry...
...that blasted seductress...
...that creature of the night...
...that damn vampress......

Author notes

it just kind of came to mind though personally its to story like but if it works as poetry hey even better

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 26, 2008
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    A powerfully penned dark piece. I love it! All the best in the contest


  • Topaze
    March 25, 2008
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    Very Good

    great entry for the contest and very well written should quite well. All the best.