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That's all I heard

I didn't see you,
Felt your arms
You pressed against my back
Unhurriedly I turned
I heard
A sigh...

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20 words or less on "A sigh"

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    wodnerfully penned. Mystic loves sensual and sweet and this was both. Great job.
    Best wishes to you in this contest,

    Passions


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Such a beautiful use of words and imagery...sensual and sweet...very inviting to the reader...thank you for entering!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Damn!

    See... YOU can make me say "Damn!" with a short burst of free burst too! Well done. Good luck in the contest, unless it's one I've entered. (Competitive, moi?)


  • Corvus Corone
    March 25, 2008
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    I want to more than 3 clappies. Awesome imagery hun

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