Springtime blossoms with a
Pallet of pastels.
Rain gently awakens the beauty
In natures colorful world.
New beginnings bring forth the
Gentleness of baby animals
Introducing the romance of life.
Sleeping trees, now bud green leaves.
Insects scurry, buzz and flutter.
Nectar collected for sweet honey.
The love of life flourishes upon us,
Having once again
Enchanted the artistic beauty of nature.
Autographed changes clarify awakening
Images of life
Renewing love, joy and happiness.
Author notes
Spring is in the air
you will notice the first letter of each line is capitalized, this is only to emphasize the acrostic, not due to bad grammer.
I believe I have used options 1,2,3
In a list
A contest entry
- Spring is in the Air by Midnight Raeven.
450 points, ended April 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Tht is so pretty i luv it
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Love it!
Good luck in my contest!
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Welcome spring you have arrived!! This was so beatifully done!! I could just imgine a beautiful place. FIlled with flowers and bambi... haha
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Thank you for your comment, I do appreciate it I am so glad that winter is over Yayyyyyyyy.
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DOnt you just love spring? This is a beautiful acrostic!!!
Love this so much. Thanks for sharing your springtime with me..... too gloomy here today
Mel
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Wonderful Acrostic! I love them and how people see them sometimes it makes me smile. This was very well written and I understood the grammar part of the capitalized letters.
This poem was beautiful and very well written.
Thank you!
Amadahy Rayne -
WOnderful usage of all three banks to form a delightful acrostic that is rich with imagery! Best wishes to you in the contest. This was a delight to read! You should do well!@
Frogz~
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Thank you for your comment I appreciate it, around my neck of the woods you can see life coming alive. I have all my bulb flowers peeking through the ground and the snow is gone, the weather is gonna be nice today no rain so i'm gonna do some yard work and start getting ready for the summer.
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My church burnt down. I haven't been to it for quite a few years, but i heard on the news tonight, that it burned down today. My school had been pulled down a few years ago, and now there's a housing estate there.
What is happening? -
*crying*
I want to see the leaves on the trees!!!!! Here it is still winter!
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BEAUTIFUL
*hug* Hi!
This write is beautiful,The reader can 'smell'spring in the air,You have also painted a very beautiful and colourful picture for the reader within your written words.I love your descriptions within your write.The acrostic poetry form is done well, and is clearly understood.I am such a dope when it comes to writting acrostic.lol lol,
but you have pulled this off well.
The last stanza...
Autographed changes clarify awakening
Images of life
Renewing love, joy and happiness...
sums up the whole poem! For some one who has not written for a while, sure has not lost her touch!!! you have been a pleasure to read.All the best in the contest
Take care and many beautiful blessings I am sending your way.
~Angel~
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and commenting on it, I always appreciate it. I am glad you liked the poem, it has been a while since I have been able to write anything I seem to not have it in me anymore. Thank you again for the comment.
Liz
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This is a very beautiful poem you have here. You did a great job with the acrostic and an awesome job using the word banks...Good luck to you my love.
With all my heart and sould, I love you.
~Patrick~
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Thank you my dear for your comment, I always value your words. It has been a while since I have written anything.
I love you to
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