Breaths Of Love

Soft, rhythmic breathing
of innocent dreams;
comprehension of unabashed virtue
whispers mother's soul.

Tears of promised protection
fall;
I breathe.

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Prompt is: "A Sigh" (20 words or less)

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Prompt 10 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm. 450 points, ended March 25, 2008, 10 entries
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individuality
April 10

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ah such a delicte poem here, tilting the head as one watches the sigh flutter gently to the loving ground. a good poem.

paulcreates
March 25, 2008
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I feel this urge to say awwwwwwww. lol
This is great!

mysticstorm
March 25, 2008

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Beautiful!!! Nothing like the feeling a mother has with her child...you wrote with such beauty and love I had to sigh when I read your words...wonderful power in brevity...
thank you for entering!

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