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Just another sleepless night

     Un autre soir ennuyant,
     Et toi t'es pas la,
     Les larmes tombent
     Sur mon oreiller,
     Et je ne peux pas t'oublier
     C'est un autre soir ennuyant.

                         Belton Richard  

 

 

Just another sleepless night here

too busy over-thinking things

to wear out the stack of DVDs

I’m just another shadow lying

in the flickers from the TV screen

the sound too low to hear

I’m reading their distant lips

one word in five or six

 

I’m staying out of bed

until daylight tells me

I don’t need to go there anyhow

it’s cold and the sheets are grey

but I won’t wash them

and lose the lipstick kiss

the last thing you left me

as a careless afterthought

 

It makes me feel somehow

you’re still here in the house

it’s a straw I still cling to

like the smell of your empty closet

so I close my eyes and guess

how far the clock-hands will travel

by the time I open them

the sad refuge-game of the sleepless

 

 

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  • layla.
    March 26, 2008

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    this is a clever piece of writing. well thought of and it has a tasteful ending. thanks for entering


  • Bazza
    March 26, 2008

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    And yes what a long time it can be ... loneliness is a two edged sword that slices throught the heart, I loved this as I do all your work
    Bazza

  • Bad Bill
    March 25, 2008
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    Not a wasted word in this excellent piece of contemporary poetry.

    Bill


  • adios muchachos gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Have you tried melatonin in lieu of prescription sleepers? I have some Lunesta, but they leave a wicked taste in your mouth the following day, which lasts all day, a little like you were chewing on a piece of malleable copper or something. My heart goes out to you or to anyone who is not sleeping well.

    JJ


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    ahhh, and don't i know this oh, so well...
    melancholic and bittersweet...these long lonely nights.

    love, lane


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    A very familiar poem. Those hands can move pretty slowly when they feel like it.

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