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Flashback

Winds,
   whispering words,

             of wisdom
 

[through memories]

Leaving ears,
silent

as yesterday's memoirs
gently,


         arise.

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Word Prompt: Echoes of Yesterday.
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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    I really liked this a lot..I really loved how you just have a gift for putting poems together. Well done


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 25, 2008

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    Great choice of words here, like the way you laid this poem out, it's very strong... I liked the alliteration you also used in this piece, added strength to the point you were making throughout this piece, beautifully written here.


  • SongOfSilence
    March 25, 2008

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    "as yesterday's memoirs gently arise..."

    whoa.

    nice

    there's not much else to say ^.^ this write is... brilliant. you're wicked talented. keep it up, huh?


    -seth

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