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Ah, Friendship ~

You're my right hand man, My absolute equal.
No smarter, prettier, or graceful than I.
We'll always compete, in silly things,
But honestly, you'll always win

It's easy to understand why we get along.
You and me, like Timone and Pumba are
Two who are always so very alike;
A warped Bonnie and Clyde

You're words are from my mouth, my thoughts.
We've learned to speak with our eyes.
Timing is everything with words,
We always match on time.

Hard to believe I hated you when we met,
Since we're so close to this day.
We became friends over intrest
In a silly movie or song.

So, my sister, my partner, my best friend,
To you, as always, these words I write
Know you are many times the only one
Who I shall cherish beyond others

You, who's picked me up when I fall
Which happens so very often
Are in this life, and more
My right hand man,
My Absolute
Equal.


Author notes

4)Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another, "What! You too? I thought I was the only one!"

by C. S. Lewis


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  • Mrs D
    December 8, 2008

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    great job .......really nice description of what true friendship is ....alot of love and appreciation for your friend was displayed in this piece.....hope you two continue this way and get ever stronger ever closer !!!



  • little-hug
    May 18, 2008

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    Such a touching tribute to your friend. I love the sincerity in it! Thank you so much for sharing this and entering..
    Good luck!
    Ellie

  • kacie marie
    April 1, 2008

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    This poem is completely amazing! I just loved it! Reallly good =] I very much enjoyed reading it. It made me think of my best friend, every word in this is true.


  • Blackwings
    March 25, 2008

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    K! This poem is sooooooooo amazing I mean it I cried it's soooooooooo awesome ^.^ I's love it sooooo much you sooooo rock at this man I's loves you you write sooo purty and sooo awesomely well

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    I really like this it is very sweet it is nice to have someone that we care about and can go to thank you for your entry into my contest much love


  • Zombieh
    March 25, 2008
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    awww

    that's cute ^^
    good poem.

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