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rain

I wish it would solidify

into glass pellets

   hanging

so I could sit here

   inside

and string a necklace

   alone

 

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Candy6
    August 2, 2008
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    Interesting poem


  • Bazza
    March 26, 2008

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    But how would you get the holes to thread ?? lol Mairi slow down lass, or ya mae blow a fuse.
    BAZZA


  • creationsfromheart
    March 26, 2008
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    aw and congrats on your gold as well.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    How vividly detailed and immensely captivating... x Thanks for sharing and many blessings. Lavender Butterfly... x


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    Very unique interpretation of the word prompt in this contest - to me, when it solidifies, we get snow - and they melt too on your tongue when you try to save them! LOL Cute.


  • LAPoe gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    This is a real Gem!!!! a lovely string of words we can all wear!
    When it rains it pours and when Mairi writes we roar our appreciation!!!
    laurie


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 25, 2008
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    perfection, whoops sorry, greatness!

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