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Her kiss lingered upon my lips,
heady wine in tiny sips,
A gentle butterfly so sweet,
alighting with tender feet.
.20 word prompt on photo above.
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This goes just perfectly with the picture. Appreciate your stopping by and commenting on Comment Please this afternoon. - guess for you it is early morning, or late evening, not sure which. You have a lovely author page as well - wonderful colors and information.
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wow, the poem portrays the picture beautifully. I love the drawing, it's so realistic, as is your poem. I applaud you, truly wonderfully, beautiful.
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This is awesome!
How did you take 20 words and turn it into that amazing poem?
I'm envious!
I love your eloquent, langorous words... your soothing style... and mostly, your ability to create an image with your words.
Even if I'd never seen the pic, I'd have known what it looked like by your words.
Excellent write!
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Thanks
Hi, thanks for the lovely review but I don't do many photo prompts now as they never seem to win a place, so I prefer writing something that tells more of a story and is more of a piece of poetry. Thanks for your generosity with the applause too.
Bazza
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Lovely.I can taste the wine.Not too dry and not too sweet,It must be those tiny feet treading the grapes, Ros
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Wow my friend. This was so lovely. Your words are stunningly beautiful. Amazing imagery. I love how you write the short poems. You take care, Sandy
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Beautifully creative with such a delicate flow... x Thanks for sharing and many blessings. Lavender Butterfly... x
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Nice one, Bazza.
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Nice
Very well done, a nice take, all the best to you.
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