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Daydreams

So often
my muse wanders off
in a misty haze
of mythical meanderings,
where a majestic panorama
of melting moments
has me savouring a world
where coffee aromas
are interlaced
with light, spring
fragrances;
a morning of soft sunlight
cleansing my spirit.

One tender touch
on my shoulder
and the madness
of a world in disarray
invades my mental wellbeing
as morbid thoughts of the future
confuse the senses.

Reality bites
and momentarily
my castle in the air crumbles.
Yet I always return,
rebuilding my magic,
dream by dream.

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Words Used In Order - MUSE, MISTY, MYTHICAL, MAJESTIC, MELTING, MORNINGS, MADNESS, MENTAL, MORBID, MAGIC.

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  • Frozentearz
    March 31, 2008

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    Congratulations on your award Alice always a joy to have your work within one of our contest, you have made great usage of the word bank
    As always.
    Blessings Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 30, 2008

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    Excellent use of the word bank! An amzing piece with the given words! Thanks for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Wow1 Great usage of the word bank.
    You write blows the prompt right out of the water.
    Fantastic job
    I'm kinda scared to give it a try now...
    my mind keeps saying no
    But hell, I may jump in if my muse wakes up

    Slendid write and I wish you the best in the contest!

    Much
    Many blessingsz
    David

  • Frozentearz
    March 25, 2008
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    Wonderful work with the word bank,
    this truly reflects those crazy moments
    Thanks for joining in.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz