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Of Age Old

          In her eye's

A burning glare
Scratches my skin

          My soul damned, 

Infernal stare
Of my grave sin

          She is

Always aware
Of where I've been

          Dreaded justice

Told to prepare
For hell to begin





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what inspired me to write this? pure fucking boredom

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  • Caellach
    March 25

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    Haha, I've been there- boredom can sometimes produce some amazing writes. Great job and thanks for entering!

  • VampireAngel
    March 25
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    Great !!!
    I like last two lines
    Very good !!!!