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Exxxit

Wet like Seattle

In the sincere sickness of a fermented intention.

Beating our wrists together,

and embracing the swarm.

Baby, why did we waste so much time in verse? 

Ive frequented this setting for sometime,

The color scheme is just perfect

and the drapes are NEVER drawn.

Spill your intimacy,

suffer your sickness unto me,

The freedom we found in our own filth.  

The upholstery never gets stained,

just our reputations do. 

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  • B Chandler
    June 3, 2008

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    Clearly we asked that all entries be labeled correctly. Secondly, the last line has touches of ironic humor to it- maybe it's just me but nevertheless good luck


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    Awesome piece, what inspired this?

  • tara wilson gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    'Wet like Seattle'

    I love that...lol

    this is awesome

    "The upholstery never gets stained,

    just our reputations do."

    cool title..love the triple X in it