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A Fighter

Challange me and catch my attention
Shake my hand to stand as equals
Strike me to create your memory
Wound me to become a friend
And defeat me to be my idol
For I am a fighter

critsize, i want to know what i did wrong rather then right

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  • VampireAngel
    March 25, 2008

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    very interesting...
    I didn't understand, way does hurting you, would someone make as friend.
    Maybe I'm dumb, but I didn't understand.
    Hm.. Maybe, because pain and suffer we remember best ?