Come Sail Away

Temptation’s journey,
billowing sails chart the waves
twilight dreams beckon,
surging with passion's fury
as sweet winds bestow quivers

navigation set
beyond the ripples of curves,
imploring moments
gazing upon shooting stars;
submerging in crest of sea

crescendo rhythm
ablaze within summer breeze,
fusing souls to storm
as currents set us adrift,
towards sensual heaven

Author notes

Triple Tanka Contest: A combination of Nature and Romance
Picture credit: http://www.emailguardian.net/wallpaper/gallery/twentyfour/night-sailing-1024.jpg

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Haiku/Senyru/Tanka • next in list

A contest entry

Romance with Nature (Triple Tanka's) by InBetweenThoughts. 750 points, ended April 12, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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InBetweenThoughts
April 12, 2008

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Thank you for your entry...my apologies for the delays in judging..best wishes, Ken IBT
- jasminerose
  April 12, 2008
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  Thank you so very much for the lovely award and points on my tanka chain I am so honored and very pleased you enjoyed it so!!
  Thank you
  xoxo
  Linda
Yazhi
March 28, 2008

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You are so amazing at these! Awesome beauty, so picturesque with a sensual passion flowing!
Awesome!
Talented talented talented, Im jealous lol
Good luck in the contest
Yazhi
Purush
March 28, 2008

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All the best to you--
Beautifully worded verse
I love the script's font too
The plain background with black and silver shine,
caught my eyes glance
All the best to you in the contest
poppa
March 26, 2008

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Lovely lovely write...unsure of the specifics of the form... but this is a beautiful romantic write...
poet2angels
March 25, 2008

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SIgh~
It amazes me how you can write these...
Of course your talent allows you to write any form beautifully....
ANother amazing creation !

Lynda
PerfectImperfection
March 25, 2008

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This is indeed wonderfully romantic! A beautiful set of form, flowing with a true beauty held in thought. Lovely use of imagery and amorous detail. Great write here dear sis!!!