enter nature irresistibly,
by depth knowing grasshoppers
and trance of butterflies taken... to you;
prepare smocked song for delicate babies!
Author notes
I tried out --
good luck isn't most imaginative; Isaiah65:11
please comment utterly ~
without unnatural emoticons NOR the applause at all, thank you
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
awareness swirls
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Thanks for the explanation which, regrefully, makes no further inroads on my apparent (!) desire to certify dimensions. I guess I live in a real world rooted in my life and that of my family - five childrwen four of them breastfed by my wife of fifty years married joy.
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not to be nervous
quantumsurveyor I don't mean to be overinterested
there's no spewing to be from me but what is special, and I guess I shouldn't ever have an obsessing idea about what might've benefited when there is speech to remember how the real life is accomplished towards earth ultimately. your take of exercising concentration on home outward is a nice emphasis.
I was only trying to hone in on more than cutie as cute indeed,
babies are my subject
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Nice
Well done, all the best to you.
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Even a viewing of the picture prompt does nothing to alleviate the numbness experienced from these words....what on earth do they mean...or on another earth? Sorry to be negative but you wanted reaction. May be my loss, who knows?
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not left alone
quantumsurveyor thanks for trying to certify if this had any dimensions
this wasn't a silly write, but one of strongest reason, albeit not all about pretty but purpose tried. there's a certainty that children don't have to change our lives as much as fit in. the way healthy living or land might get enhanced by cute creatures, via consistency without any yes but a sneak of no in having to really restructure to include them. a grasshopper could even move to lyrical observation and sureness of ready edibles that delves an unforced attraction, and I've seen a man with a butterfly on his nose not behind glass; so there are rhythms more than merely not being uncomfortable but meshing how it's not smashing ourselves uncomforted by believing in such close opportunity of simplicity.
So, margins of a tube neck tied dress even can annotate an example of what's always easy for a woman, even if breastfeeding should occur. It's not another theme of who we are for wardrobe alteration but in flexible momentum. AND high waisted pitch of such hold could blend helpfully for the unwalking yet heartbeat beautifully to react as well...
I'm sorry my intensification didn't make '20 amazing words' for you,
babies are my subject
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How truly captivating and of course no doubt thought provoking. You take pictures and turn them into something not many can. well penned fine poet... x Thanks ever so much for sharing this and many blessings to you too... x Lavender Butterfly.
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a compliment to be comfortable with
Lavender Butterfly I liked exploring bouncy notions
thank you very much for spending captivated time here, and I intend on seeing more of other entries around the inspiration never nothing...
I'm buzzing to add,
babies are my subject
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