Having heard the nature so selfless.
what we saw never contradicted what we have heard!
With the seemless salt water in the sea,
dissolving to form a crowning cloud,
the sky returns only transparent shower of water drops,
with no salt left in its grace!
The nature always barters the best.
When the earth not so pout with pride,
i have everything abreast when i stride.
oh! we are never alone.
Author notes
Prompt: we are never alone!
A contest entry
- ~* Thought to Ponder Over *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended March 29, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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What you say is very true
We are never alone. Thank you for your reminder and the best of luck in the contest 
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: We are never alone!
This piece tugged at Spirit for You brought forth many images which brought forth Peace actually
Felt as if there...
Nature and the elements enlighten
These lines grabbed and pulled~
When the earth not so pout with pride,
i have everything abreast when i stride.
oh! we are never alone.
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Voice also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Your not wrong here, we are never truly alone. Wonderful piece. All the best in the contest
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